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EDIT 1 !! :
:iconfladius:~Fladius drew it :love:

EDIT 2 !! :
When I drew that it was to be printed in A4 for my school interview so I wasn't able to make a better layout in this little format ! so I finaly change it now ^^' maybe a few better ...

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:bulletred::bulletred:more picture of he : , (and more to come ):bulletred::bulletred:

TADA ! we have a Winner ^^' the poll result were well with my personal opinion :D (even i realy liked 2 other one too :( ) !

:iconrenegade-angel23: , thanks you for this name, (will contact you for the little prize of this little contest ^^' )
and thank you all who have participate and vote to help me :smooch: Love you all :heart::lol: !!!

I think, the name fit well with the little history I write :) (even something with melt should be again better, but i like Crimson, it sound nice !! :) ^^' )

I have surely made some mistake in the text with my english XD sorry !

Traduction française de l'histoire de Crimson :
(oui oui je sais je suis nul quand il faut raconter des histoires et désolée pour les fautes XD héhé !!!)

Crimsom était le fils de deux malchanceux alicorns. La semaine suivant sa naissance, une dragonne si envieuse et désireuse d'avoir un enfant, entra dans leur monde et massacra les parents du nouveau né pour s'emparer de celui ci. Lors de son retour vers son royaume , elle se rendit compte qu'au creu de ses griffes, il ne se trouvait plus le jeune animal apeuré mais une flaque rougeâtre et bouillonnante. Prise de panique elle lacha la "chose" entre deux mondes. En effet au contact brulant de la gigantesque dragonne, les os de Crimson avaient fondus.
Mais, dans ce nouveau monde, la chaleur du dragon l'ayant quitter, Crimsom se remodella, ses os et ses organes se changèrent en une pierre plus solide et translucide qu'un rubis. Ses poils repousèrent aussi rouge que le sang qu'avait versé ses parents pour le protèger.

Depuis ce jour Crimson erre dans ce monde noir et glaciale. Le seul souvenir qu'il gardait de sa famille était cette griffure à l'oeil que lui avait fait son père lors d'un jeu, par mégarde. "


My Character is © Aude Pfister aka Whisperss(s) 2009
BUT you are realy welcome to draw/paint/sculpt/ (what ever you want ) it :) and I should be very very honored if you do ^^' just let me know and credit me on the comment !

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:bulletred::bulletred:more picture of he : [link] , [link] (and more to come ):bulletred::bulletred:

Critiques


:iconflynn-the-cat:
Firstly, very, very, nice reference sheet - it's actually nice to look at as well as being useful. Well done for drawing everything properly :D

it's quite dark - this isn't so bad if one fullviews, but may mean people don't bother. I'm not sure what other colour scheme you could use, though.

The text on the right is a bit awkward; I feel it work work better if it were top-right rather than bottom-right, and you had the hooves on the left and the little tiny sketches and the colour scheme organised under the text... ah, it could be rearranged a lot of ways.
I think, because he's facing AWAY from the text, the eye is led out of the sheet, which is why the text feels out of place.


The hooves are LOVELY - I really approve of the detail, it adds so much to the sheet. I don't think the claws work at all, though - they seem very impractical, as if they'd just snap off. They look as if they should be larger; I would make them more part of the actual hoof. They are slightly more original than the usual 'claws for hooves' - but one reason that's a standard is because it works. So perhaps a cross between those?
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:iconsemaj007:
lovely work! I love how much detail and backstory was given to this creature of yours!

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:icongidgetann:
Wow that is pretty cool, I love it:) cool idea!
:iconkatusia:
I love his hooves and wings, they look like they were made of glass. Great work on him :D

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:) thanks !

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"The wall on which the prophets wrote
Is cracking at the seams
Upon the instruments of death
The sunlight brightly gleams"

Can't stop thinking about that song when I see him

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The fate of all mankind I see
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:iconbahakell:
Sympathique petite histoire, en tout cas, tu as du t'amuser pour faire tout les détails XD

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magnifique... et... j'aimme l'histoire ^^ :hug:

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C'est un travail merveilleux! :clap:
J'adore la présentation!:love:

À bientôt! :iconbennyplz::iconbemyvalentineplz:

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